A few Poems i wrote.

[jammy]

Here's a few poems that i've written, please tell me what you think! Constuctrive critism welcome

Day
The sky is blue
The clouds are white
The trees are green
Am i right?

The sun is yellow
The clouds are white
The sea is blue
What a wonderful sight!

The sky is blue
The clouds are white
The grass is green
Isn't it bright?

There is no sun
The clouds are grey
The world is dark
What happened to the day?

If i was invisible...
If I was invisible
I would listen to you talking
I would watch you laughing
I would be silent and still
I wouldn’t smile at all
But isn’t that what happens already?
Am I not already invisible?
I do all these things but I’m not
I’m not invisible I’m ignored.

Jealousy
I thought i liked you
I thought you were my friend
This may be just me
But i think it might be the end

This was only your first time
You don't even like Drama
I know this wasn't planned
But i still want to turn you into a Llama

I know this wasn't your fault
Not exactly, Not at all
You're probably better than me
But i still feel small

I'm extremley sorry
For never ever believing
The true potential in you
I guess i will be leaving

I believe in you now
I know you can do it well
You will be the star of the show
I know it, i can tell!

Have you ever....?
Have you ever felt like crying
But know that you can't?
Have you ever been so angry
You feel like you can't be calm?
Have you ever felt like sleeping
But can't stop but stay awake?
Have you ever been so happy
You feel that its all just fake?
Have you ever felt that you're not involved
But know you will be in the end?
Have you ever been in the middle so bad
You feel you'll lose a friend?
I've felt all of these things
I know what it's like, it's hard and horrible
Have you ever felt like me?
Have you ever been these things?
Have you ever.....?

[Acer]

Wow, you got some interesting poems you wrote there, Jammy! Awesome work!