Hemoteps Best poems of 03-04

[Hemotep]

ive written about twent, and only two of them get the spotlight:

Lost

I am so lost
And it has just begun
I walk alone with exhaust
It seems the anger has won
I feel the pain no more
Was it just my imagination
It has left me be
Though I live on
It has abandoned me
So it has finally gone
I find myself with a new face
Even though I'm still not beaming
My mind resides in a brand new place
I still dont know what to bring
Although I'm still lost
I don't Know where to turn
No matter the cost
The fires of anger still burn


Deep

I can barely see
the faces staring at me
My legs are shaky
I've got blood on my sweater already
Should I spill out my mind
Or walk away, and leave them behind
My thoughts are mine to keep
Even if they are foriegn to me

also shown here:
www.geocities.com/highschoolgoth/poetry.html

[Acer]

The Lost and Deep poems is the best one yet! You came out with the bestest poetry.

[theone]

yeh i agree its good to see someone with a bit a talent in poetry i can't stand Willy Shakespeare

[jammy]

They were great! Your really talented!

[Acer]

Yeah. Hemotep can make awesome poems. I do hope he posts more like this soon!